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1、概要寫(xiě)作概要寫(xiě)作Summary writingSummary writing高考新題型高考新題型概要寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（概要寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（2125points）：）：1.理解理解準(zhǔn)確準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋，涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)所有要點(diǎn) 2.準(zhǔn)確準(zhǔn)確使用相應(yīng)的使用相應(yīng)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 3.完全完全使用使用自己的語(yǔ)言自己的語(yǔ)言。(60-80W)4.有效有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分連接成分，使概要，使概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊contents(內(nèi)容內(nèi)容)language skills(語(yǔ)言語(yǔ)言)structure(結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu))Once upon a time,industrial goods

2、 were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to

3、the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!Our indu

4、strial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,then we will start to take care of what we have.But why cant we act before this happens?Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of wa

5、ste is a virtue?（182W）Step 1.Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.Nowadays industry has persuaded us t

6、hat products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging m

7、aterial that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,then we will start to take care of w

8、hat we have.But why cant we act before this happens?Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?概要寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)概要寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn) 1How to get the key points quickly and correctly?(如何快速、準(zhǔn)確地捕捉要點(diǎn)如何快速、準(zhǔn)確地捕捉要點(diǎn))抓住主題句或關(guān)鍵信息，忽略次要信息抓住主題句或關(guān)鍵信息，忽略次要信息Para 1：Once upon a time,industrial goods were

9、made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.detailed exampleu忽略具體事例忽略具體事例topic sentence概要寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)概要寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn) 2 How to express the key points by using your own words properly?(如何靈活詮釋?zhuān)?guī)避抄襲的嫌疑如何靈活詮釋?zhuān)?guī)避抄襲的嫌疑)charact

10、eristics1.Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever._,industrial goods were made _.Some time ago;In the past;Decades agoto be used for a long timeto function well for a long time;durable近義詞替換近義詞替換You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.Decades ago,industrial goods were m

11、ade durable.spent much money ontreasuretreat it kindlyYou spent much money on it and treasure it.Decades ago,industrial goods were made durableYou spent much money on it and treasure it.Para1.use it carefully Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to

12、throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is

13、bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!topic sentencedetailed examplescharacteristicsresultu忽略具體事例忽略具體事例 Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which

14、is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!1.Nowadays industry has persuaded us

15、that products couldnt last a long time.2.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.3.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Modern Industrymade us believeconvincednot permanentModern industry has convinced us that products are not pe

16、rmanent.short-lived近義詞替換近義詞替換2.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them.It is more expensive to repair them than to throw them away.改變主語(yǔ)（形式主語(yǔ)）改變主語(yǔ)（形式主語(yǔ)）正話反說(shuō)、反話正說(shuō)正話反說(shuō)、反話正說(shuō)This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.which has resulted in a great waste of the earths resources.改變句式改變句式result in Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent.To throw them away is cheaper