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1、火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去中考英語寫作中考英語寫作火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去五步法：五美四連三列二構(gòu)一審書面表達(dá)火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去Step by stepStep by step1.審審2.構(gòu)構(gòu)3.列列4.連連5.美美文體_ 時(shí)態(tài)_ 人稱_連字成句，連句成段在有把握的情況下在有把握的情況下，變換句型，靈活使用長(zhǎng)短句和復(fù)合句，升華中心思想，使文增

2、色。把握文章框架結(jié)構(gòu)，必要時(shí)必要時(shí)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)列出要點(diǎn)火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去For Example:生活習(xí)慣與健康生活習(xí)慣與健康問題（熱點(diǎn)）問題（熱點(diǎn)）健康的生活習(xí)慣對(duì)于成長(zhǎng)中的我們是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的呢?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文。信息提示：健康飲食。.早睡早起,不熬夜。.參加運(yùn)動(dòng),強(qiáng)身健體。要求:根據(jù)信息提示,把握要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不逐字翻譯。字?jǐn)?shù)在80詞左右。美連列構(gòu)審書面表達(dá)火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇

3、敢地沖出去一、審：審：文體：時(shí)態(tài)：人稱：討論型、議論性、觀點(diǎn)看法型、意見建議型一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)第一人稱（we）二、構(gòu)構(gòu)：仔細(xì)讀題健康的生活習(xí)慣對(duì)于成長(zhǎng)中的我們是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的呢?這是拋出問題，是此文要探討的中心問題。1.健康飲食。2.早睡早起,不熬夜。3.參加運(yùn)動(dòng),強(qiáng)身健體。具體健康生活習(xí)慣的羅列。以上兩個(gè)部分是題目給的信息，是不是這兩部分信息寫出來就結(jié)束了呢？還需要進(jìn)一步歸納，總結(jié)，點(diǎn)題，或者升華主題。結(jié)構(gòu)初現(xiàn)：拋出觀點(diǎn)展開論述總結(jié)呼吁（點(diǎn)題、升華）火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去三、列：列

4、出要點(diǎn)列：列出要點(diǎn)1.Eating habits.2.Other living habits.3.Take exercise.展開：eat more fruit and vegetables；less meat;drink a lot of water；eat on time;eat a lot;junk food;breakfast is important(necessary);wash hands before eating;stomach.Etc.展開：Stay up late；play computer games too late at night;over use phones;

5、get up early;feel sleepy in class;hard to focus on study.etc.展開：many kinds of sports;keep us active and strong;full of energy;stop from getting cold.Etc.四、連。連。Use information above to make sentences.注意銜接過渡詞：火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去英語寫作時(shí)常用的過渡語英語寫作時(shí)常用的過渡語:表并列：表并列：and,besi

6、des,in addition（加之）,whats more,表轉(zhuǎn)折：表轉(zhuǎn)折：but,yet,however,on the contrary（相反）,表因果關(guān)系表因果關(guān)系：because,so,therefore,as a result表先后順序表先后順序：First,Second,Third,Next,Then,Finally表時(shí)間關(guān)系表時(shí)間關(guān)系：when,while,after,before,then,表列舉說明表列舉說明：for example,for instance,such as，like發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)：in my opinion,to my understanding,from

7、 my point of view,表總結(jié)陳詞表總結(jié)陳詞：in general,in all,in a word,generally speaking火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去Sample:All of us want to be healthy.I think healthy habits are very important for us.As we know,we must have enough food to keep us healthy.Breakfast is necessary.It gives

8、 us energy for the morning and is good for our stomachs as well.We must also have the right kinds of food.Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less meat,no junk food.Dont forget to wash your hands before meals.Nowadays,more and more people stay up late at night,its obviously bad for our hea

9、lth.If we cant get enough sleep,we may feel sleepy in class or even have a headache.We should(are supposed to)get up early as well.Moreover,taking exercise is necessary for our health.Such as playing basketball,taking a walk after meals,swimming and so on.Exercise will keep us active and strong as w

10、ell as stop us from getting a cold.Remember,life is movement.In a word,health is wealth.Only to have healthy bodies can we enjoy lifes pleasure and make our dreams come true.火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去臨考如何提高寫作能力臨考如何提高寫作能力：適當(dāng)加強(qiáng)閱讀量適當(dāng)加強(qiáng)閱讀量讀得越多，在潛移默化中，讀得越多，在潛移默化中，你提高英語寫作能力的速度也

11、就越快你提高英語寫作能力的速度也就越快背誦經(jīng)典文段背誦經(jīng)典文段在平時(shí)閱讀訓(xùn)練及范例作文在平時(shí)閱讀訓(xùn)練及范例作文中把一些中把一些經(jīng)典經(jīng)典文段整理到本子中，抽時(shí)間背誦，文段整理到本子中，抽時(shí)間背誦，不能不說是積極備戰(zhàn)，快速提高寫作成績(jī)的一條不能不說是積極備戰(zhàn)，快速提高寫作成績(jī)的一條捷徑背，可以加強(qiáng)語感，使自己的表達(dá)更地道捷徑背，可以加強(qiáng)語感，使自己的表達(dá)更地道加強(qiáng)練習(xí)加強(qiáng)練習(xí)加強(qiáng)實(shí)際寫作練習(xí)至關(guān)重要我加強(qiáng)實(shí)際寫作練習(xí)至關(guān)重要我們練習(xí)的重點(diǎn)是文章是否切題，行文是否流暢，們練習(xí)的重點(diǎn)是文章是否切題，行文是否流暢，有無嚴(yán)重語法錯(cuò)誤等有無嚴(yán)重語法錯(cuò)誤等火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)

12、機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去Exercise after class:中學(xué)生中學(xué)生應(yīng)該應(yīng)該使用手機(jī)使用手機(jī)么？么？贊成意見贊成意見：1.現(xiàn)在是信息社會(huì),手機(jī)是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.應(yīng)充分利用好手機(jī)。如偶遇突發(fā)事故,可立即撥打手機(jī)求助。3.可在每天學(xué)習(xí)之余利用手機(jī)游戲放松一下自己。4.只要正確使用好手機(jī),也可以對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)有幫助。反對(duì)意見反對(duì)意見：1.學(xué)校已提供了公共電話,因此手機(jī)并不能帶來更多的方便,而且花費(fèi)較多。2.若課堂接聽手機(jī)會(huì)影響上課。3.學(xué)生玩手機(jī)游戲或接發(fā)短信,將無法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。談?wù)勀銓?duì)此的看法，要求要點(diǎn)齊全，100詞左右。火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不

13、可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去Sample My name is Li Ming.Now let me tell you something about my low-carbon life.First,I try my best to go to school on foot every day.Second,I always remember to turn off the lights,TVs and so on when I leave the room.Third,I take an active part in outdoor ac

14、tivities so that I will stay away from my computer and spend little time surfing the Internet.Besides,I dont use the plastic bags.I am proud of my low-carbon life.My Low-carbon Life 火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去On watching TV Now watching TV has become a part of our life.It

15、has advantages and disadvantages.On the one hand,we can learn many things from it and it can take us anywhere we havent been before.On the other hand,it also does harm to us.If we put our hearts into TV,we may have no time to do our homework.Besides,it is bad for our eyes.Many students begin to wear

16、 glasses because of watching TV too long.Some TV programs are unhealthy and they are bad for us too.So in my opinion,I think we should watch TV less and we shouldnt watch unhealthy TV programs.If everyone follow these,life will become more colorful and healthy.火災(zāi)襲來時(shí)要迅速疏散逃生，不可蜂擁而出或留戀財(cái)物，要當(dāng)機(jī)立斷，披上浸濕的衣服或裹上濕毛毯、濕被褥勇敢地沖出去Class Over!