書面表達(dá)Howtomakeyourwritingmoreeffective？By Janet1 2021字?jǐn)?shù)不夠或未能傳達(dá)讀者任何信息。samples of student work2 2021字跡潦草難以辨認(rèn) 3 2021readandwritefindithard fluentEnglishtowrite Greatchanges roads hadtakenplaceinmyhometownbuildingswidened ItwillbewonderfulwhenyoucometoChinaifyouarefreeshowyouaroundIwillbegladto語言不地道;中文式思維;語言錯誤較多samples of student work4 2021AgoodcompositionContentstructure language5 2021Whatisagoodwriting？Content:coverthekeypoints(內(nèi)容要完整)everythingmustbetothepoint(切題)Structure:*Goodbeginningandending(好的開頭結(jié)尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(結(jié)構(gòu)合理,行文流暢)Language:*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(沒有語法錯誤)*appropriatevocabularyandexpressions(得體的詞匯和表達(dá))goodsentencepatterns（句式）6 20211.Our school is at the foot of Huangyang Mountain.2.Our school is very good.Our schoolissituated/locatedat the foot of Huangyang Mountain.Our school iswell-equipped/isequippedwithadvancedteachingfacilities.I.使用得體的詞匯或短語3.Our winter vacation is coming.Our winter vacation isapproaching/drawingnear.approach/draw near7 20214.Weareveryhappyduringwinterholidays.Wehavealotoffunduringwinterholidays.5.Everyoneshoulddohishomework.Everyoneissupposedtodohishomework.6.WeallthinkMissliuisagreatteacher.（評價很高）Weallthinkhighlyofher.8 2021Letsappreciatesomesentences.II.豐富的句式：9 20211.OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.2.2.Withthenoisegoingon,Icouldntgoonstudying.3.3.Locatedatthesouthwestcornerofourschool,thegardencoversanareaof1000squaremetres.4.4.Itwasnotuntilshetookoffherglassesthatherfatherrecognizeher.5.InChina,ourwinterholidayslastabout20days,6.duringwhichtimewecelebratethebiggestfestival-theSpringfestival.倒裝句with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)非謂語動詞短語強調(diào)句定語從句10 2021Letsimitatethesentences.11 2021 I realized Janet was a nice teacher only after I left school We can live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings only in this way.一、only 倒裝句 We can expect our hometown take on a new look only with combined efforts.Only with combined efforts,can we expect our hometown take on a new look.Only after I left school did I realize Janet was a nice teacher.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.12 2021二、強調(diào)句Itis/was+被強調(diào)部分+that/who+其他.Thelackofenvironmentalawarenesscausessuchbehavior.Itisthelackofenvironmentalawarenessthatcausessuchbehavior.IdidntknowWangkaiuntilIsawDisguiser.ItwasnotuntilIsawDisguiserthatIknewWangkai.13 20211.Thethiefwastakenawaybythepolice.Hishandsweretied.(with+賓語+分詞）2.2.Thewomanisbeautifulandtearsarerunningonhercheeks.(with+賓語+分詞）Thethiefwastakenawaybythepolice,withhishandstied.Thewomanisbeautiful,withtearsrunningonhercheeks.三、with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)14 2021 有這么多人支持你，你不用擔(dān)心。Withsomanypeoplehelpingyou,you neednt worry.隨著高考的臨近，很多學(xué)生選擇撕書以緩解學(xué)習(xí)的壓力。Withthecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,some students choose to tear their books into pieces in order to reduce stress and pressure from their learning.由于我的耳機壞了，我不能做聽力練習(xí)。Withmyearphonebroken,I cant do the listening exercises.15 20211.Two people are walking on the grass and totally ignore the notice which says,“keep off the grass”.2.Chenjiale walked out of the classroom and many girls followed her.四、非謂語動詞Two people are walking on the grass totally ignoring the notice which says,“keep off the grass”.Chenjiale walked out of the classroom,followed by many girls.16 2021The kids were invited to the party and they were very excited.When I walked through the park,I saw many beautiful flowers.Invitedtotheparty,thekidswereveryexcited.Walkingthroughthepark,Isawmanybeautifulflowers.17 2021我的夢想是我能進(jìn)入一所重點大學(xué)（akeyuniversity）。MydreamisthatIcanenterakeyuniversity.我能進(jìn)入一所重點大學(xué)是我的夢想。ThatIcanenterakeyuniversityismydream.IhaveadreamthatIcanenterakeyuniversity.我有一個夢想我能進(jìn)入一所重點大學(xué)。我總是夢想著我能進(jìn)入一所重點大學(xué)。IalwaysdreamthatIcanenterakeyuniversity.五、名詞性從句18 20212.他建議我努力學(xué)習(xí)。1.HesuggestedthatIshouldstudyhard.賓語從句2.ItissuggestedtomethatIshouldstudyhard.主語從句3.HegavemeasuggestionthatIshouldstudyhard.同位語從句4.WhathesuggestedtomeisthatIshouldstudyhard.主語從句+表語從句19 2021Lets conclude.InversionEmphatic sentenceNon-predicate verbWith composite structure Noun clauses20 2021Asaresult;Inaddition;Tobeginwith;HoweverUseproperlinkingwordsDearEditor,Asastudentreader,IamwritingtotalkabouttheEnglishtextbookspublishedbyyourhouse.Thesebookshavemanyadvantages._oneofthemisthatwecanfindavarietyoftopics,suchasscience,cultureandhistory.Thesetopics,Ithink,areverypopularwithusstudents.Tobeginwith21 2021 Inmyopinion;Therefore;However;whatsmore_,alongwiththetextstherearemanybeautifulandcolorfulpictures,whichcanhelpusunderstandEnglishbetter.EventhestudentswhousedtodislikeEnglishhaveturnedouttobeinterestedinthesubject._,someofthetextshavetoomanynewwordsandexpressionswhicharehardforus._,Idliketosuggestchangingthemintoeasierones.whatsmoreHoweverTherefore22 2021Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife_._,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial._,theywanttowinothersadmirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool._,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.Weshouldpract