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1、初中英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧指導(dǎo),Learning aims:了解中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。掌握書(shū)面表達(dá)的類(lèi)型及寫(xiě)作技巧。能夠應(yīng)用寫(xiě)作技巧及所學(xué)知識(shí)，完成書(shū)面表達(dá)的寫(xiě)作。,中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（5+1）,第一檔（13-15分）信息完整，表達(dá)流暢，無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤或基本無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔（10-12分）信息基本完整，表達(dá)較流暢，有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。第三檔（7-9分）能傳達(dá)部分信息，表達(dá)不夠流暢，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，但句子基本可讀。 第四檔（4-6分）只能傳達(dá)少量信息，表達(dá)不流暢，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，只有少量句子可讀。 第五檔（0-3分）只能傳達(dá)個(gè)別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個(gè)別句子可讀。,書(shū)寫(xiě)(卷面)：,隱藏的

2、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)！,書(shū)寫(xiě)注意事項(xiàng),3、一旦寫(xiě)錯(cuò)，規(guī)范修改用一條斜線(xiàn)劃掉即可。 eg:,He can speker English very well.,He can speker speak English very well.,Talk about it in your group.,1、規(guī)范書(shū)寫(xiě)，字母飽滿(mǎn)圓潤(rùn)，格式正確。 作文答題紙一般為單線(xiàn)，我們應(yīng)將單線(xiàn)作為“四線(xiàn)格”中的第三線(xiàn)并以此為基準(zhǔn)書(shū)寫(xiě)，不要把它作為第四線(xiàn)，讓字母吊在線(xiàn)上。,2、堅(jiān)決不能在試卷上出現(xiàn)亂涂、亂寫(xiě)、或用修正液覆蓋現(xiàn)象給人一種凌亂的感覺(jué)。,Game,英文字母示例,單從書(shū)寫(xiě)上看猜一猜他們的作文會(huì)是得多少分？,中考各檔書(shū)面表達(dá)示例,

3、15,4分,6,3,Remember：,We must pay attention to our handwriting, it can help us get a high grade.,作文框架：,標(biāo) 題,開(kāi)頭：,Do you know _?,Hi, I am _. I am 14. I am a good student.,First, you can. . . Second, you can. . . . Third, you can. . . . Next, you can. . . .Then, you should. . . At last, you should. . .,正文

4、：,結(jié)尾：,All in all, if you do like these, Im sure you can _.,+V原,+V原,Let me tell you something about it.,一、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范, 卷面整潔。,寫(xiě)作的兩個(gè)層次,抄，照著原文或表格抄,有分，但比較低,低層次,自己寫(xiě)： 參考，借用原文中的句子或信息，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)男薷?分?jǐn)?shù)高,較高層次,自己怎樣寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)作文：(學(xué)會(huì)遷移),1 審題： 人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)， 要點(diǎn)(有中文提示),2 扣題，巧妙開(kāi)頭,3 借用原文或表格中的句子或信息， 適當(dāng)改寫(xiě)或擴(kuò)充,4 (如有中文提示的) 應(yīng)用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或自己 會(huì)的句子來(lái)寫(xiě),并加入自己的想法或

5、觀點(diǎn) (評(píng)價(jià)),5 檢查，修改,評(píng)價(jià)性的句子（正反兩方面的詞）：評(píng)價(jià)事情：I think it is interesting/ funny/ 評(píng)價(jià)物： I think it is beautiful.(terrible/ expensive / cheap/ useful/ )評(píng)價(jià)人、心情： I think he (she ) is very happy .(friendly / kind/),巧妙開(kāi)頭：,Do you know how to get good grades in the exam?,How to get good grades in the exam.,Hi, I am _.

6、 I am 14. I am a good student.,Jim,巧妙利用原文句子：用連詞將這些句子連起來(lái)： First, Second, Third, Next,Then At last.,結(jié)尾照應(yīng)開(kāi)頭： All in all, if you do like these, Im sure you can get good grades in the exam.,First, you d better not write your answers before you read over the whole exam paper. Second, you can choose the pr

7、oblems that seem easy to you and do them first. Third, Next, .Then(選擇其中的一、兩點(diǎn)填進(jìn)去） All in all, if you can do like these, I am sure you can get good grades in the exam.,Do you know how to get good grades in the exam?,How to get good grades in the exam.,Hi, I am _. I am 14. I am a good student.,Tom,How

8、to get on with our parents.,Let me tell you something about it.First, we can find a good time to talk with our parents. For example, when we are eating dinner, going out for a walk or watching TV.Second, we can tell them something we are interested in or ask them about their lives when they were you

9、ng. Third, we can listen to them carefully and watch them quietly. Next, we can share our thoughts and feelings with them. At last, we should be honest. Our parents will trust us more.,Hi, I am _. I am 14. I am a good student.,Tom,All in all, if we do like these, Im sure we can get on with our paren

10、ts. So we can go on easily in the future study and work.,標(biāo)題：,Do you know how to get on with our parents?,開(kāi)頭：,結(jié)尾：,怎樣保持身體健康 (How to Keep Healthy)內(nèi)容包括:1、多運(yùn)動(dòng)2、合理科學(xué)飲食起居3、保證充足的睡眠 4、保持快樂(lè)心情舒暢5、不吸煙喝酒,怎樣保持健康的身體(How to Keep Healthy),1 健康很重要。,2 我們?cè)鯓颖３纸】的兀?3 首先， 我們應(yīng)該早起。,4 第二， 我們應(yīng)該吃健康的食物。,5 我們應(yīng)該多吃蔬菜和水果。,Health is

11、 very important.,How can we keep healthy?,First, we should get up early.,Second, we should eat healthy food.,Third, we should eat more vegetables and fruit.,6 我們必須少吃肉。,7 我們必須多喝水。,8 最后， 我們必須經(jīng)常鍛煉。,我們可以放學(xué)后打籃球，踢足球。,Next, We should eat less meat.,Then, We should drink more water.,At last, we should do sp

12、orts every day.,We can play basketball, play football after school.,Let me tell you something about it. As a middle school student, first, youd better do more exercise such as playing ball games, running, swimming and jumping rope. Second, you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Dont eat too

13、 much meat but more fruit and vegetables. Third, you need enough sleep or rest. Next, keep yourself happy. As people often say, smiling makes you younger. At last, you mustnt drink or smoke. They are bad for your health.That is my advice.,All in all, I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.,Do yo

14、u know how to keep healthy?,Hi, I am _. I am 14. I am a good student.,Tom,How to keep healthy.,標(biāo)題：,開(kāi)頭：,結(jié)尾：,應(yīng)試策略,A常見(jiàn)題型：talk in your group 1、根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示完成作文。 2、根據(jù)表格提示完成作文。 3、根據(jù)圖片提示完成作文。 要求：寫(xiě)一篇80字左右的英語(yǔ)作文。,書(shū)面表達(dá)常見(jiàn)題型及寫(xiě)作技巧,B寫(xiě)作策略:please, remember,審 圈 列 定 連草稿紙,抄試卷,審題目：要切中題意。考試說(shuō)明指出，書(shū)面表達(dá)要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認(rèn)真審題，看到考題后

15、，先不要急于動(dòng)筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架或畫(huà)面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫(huà)、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來(lái)審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時(shí)態(tài)、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等。,2. 圈要點(diǎn)：防止遺漏要點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)是給分的一個(gè)重要因素。為了防止寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中遺漏要點(diǎn)，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐條列出。,3. 列提綱：為寫(xiě)作做好準(zhǔn)備。根據(jù)文章要點(diǎn)短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞記下，形成提綱。我們?cè)谶M(jìn)行寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞。將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形

16、成提綱。,4. 定基調(diào)：定出時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)、順序、開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾。,5. 寫(xiě)全文：寫(xiě)短文時(shí)要做到以下幾個(gè)方面：1).語(yǔ)言通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。2)上下文要連貫, 詞數(shù)一定要達(dá)到要求.,3) 不會(huì)表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑。 考試作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò)，容易被扣分，閱卷場(chǎng)上有句話(huà)：“錯(cuò)誤誤面前人人平等”。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來(lái)或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡(jiǎn)。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。,4) 錦上添花, 結(jié)尾適當(dāng)評(píng)論,發(fā)表己見(jiàn)。How friendly they

17、are! We can learn from them. They had a good time very much. What a happy family!,1.表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, bothand; not onlybut also, neithernor;2.表示條件: if3.表示順序: first , next，then, finally; 4.表示因果: because, so;5.表示選擇: or, eitheror;6.表示解釋: for example, such as;7.表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however,關(guān)聯(lián)詞,5)成文之后 一般語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目的檢查,人稱(chēng): Mr

18、. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office. 時(shí)態(tài): They go to the island last week.主謂一致: Everyone in our class work hard. 習(xí)慣用法: He helps me in my English冠詞用法： He is a honest student.,he,went,works,with,an,將草稿認(rèn)真抄寫(xiě)到答題紙上，一定注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的注意事項(xiàng)。,抄,英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧,完型填空,在做完型填空時(shí)一定要做到:,1.通讀全文,了解大意,2.瞻前顧后,逐步填空,3.認(rèn)真復(fù)查,適當(dāng)調(diào)整,